My City

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Winding through the corridors

The city breathes

Heaving its empty chest

Wheezing and coughing

Writhing its stomach

Desperation

Veins pumping with traffic

Pollution coursing

Cancer in every breath

Bloodsick

The city: diseased

Injustice

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