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This is sorrowful, but lovely. I do not have any critiques to make it better. The flow is quite nice, and I enjoy the use/non-use of proper punctuation/capitalization/etc. It reminds me of how I free write in my journal. Also, I really enjoy ending on the question. I hope you get the answer you want. Good luck.

I love the simplicity of it that allows it room for further interpretation. Interesting scheme too!

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