Scrapping a Poem (Braided Poem #1)

I like it! I swear this is what its like inside my head as a write- especially as an amature. Those feelings of learning/trying to get better and then it's no good. "rip it apart/ heart stripped" really nice.

Fractured voices, choices manufactured. Indeed, that is what we do when we try to fit a syllable or a rhyme in place. This poem is somewhat of a self fulfilling prophecy in that regard. Hopefully you'll do better, next time.

Couldn't resist being a smartarse, sorry.

You captured the frustrations of a writer flawlessly. Awesome work.