[Review Video] (Swearing, Violence, Strippers) VR storytelling - GTA 5

Hello, Trying out a new style of video for my channel. Video Here

Self Review: My thumbnails are all consistently shite but Im not resorting to click bait just yet. And I cant say I've seen many greyscale cropped thumbnails out there. Might change that location of the "...in Los Santos" as its near the time stamp. SEO was kinda hard to put a finger on it so I did the usual "gta 5 gameplay, gta V gameplay gta 5 vr, gta 5 virtual reality etc etc. I think the SEO is as good as it can be so I only used 16 tags. Technically I think its ok. Audio is balanced enough. Intro/outro graphics are suitable. The total video duration might be too long. Jokes might not be funny - but I've gotten positive feedback off the humour. Anyway, appreciate any feedback. Thanks.

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