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Acid Sleep (Drama, 6 pgs)

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Logline: A surreal look into the life of a troubled young man who struggles to deal with love, friendship, and family.

This is something I finished recently. I was trying to write a screenplay about my experience with psychosis and after waking up from taking acid the night before I had this idea.

What did you like? What didn't you like? Would it make a good short film?

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BxFcl2Xq4H7ibHA0aHZITFoycXM/view?usp=sharing

Posted Aug 29, 2016, 11:06 PM UTC

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