[LFA] Female wood elf ranger

Gave it a go at drawing my character but feel it didn't go that well, would love to see how other people draw her :-)

Andraste is a female wood elf, she is 5 foot 9 inches, is slender and fit, has green eyes, pale greenish white skin and black hair.

She is used to living in trees and is a bit of a loner, she carries a long bow with a quiver of 20 arrows, a dagger, a belt pouch with 10 gold pieces and wears leather armour Andraste's companion is a male blood hawk

my attempts at drawing Andraste and an image of a blood hawk, http://imgur.com/a/PfVR7