I Just Dropped a New Song and I would Appreciate some feedback or reviews so I can become better. Thanks guys.

I released a full 14 song mixtape last April and things didn't go as I had planned. I put an incredible amount of effort into it (you can find it here: https://soundcloud.com/vem-7/sets/monochromatic-mixtape) but it ended with me getting talked about negatively around school, which sucked. This is the second song I'm releasing since then and I've tried much harder to get to where I am and I'm still working on it. If any of you would like to check my new song out it's at https://soundcloud.com/vem-7/kamikaze . Some feedback and criticism is much appreciated and it'll help me out a lot. Thank you all so much.