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TheSleepyHead

The thought of me and you, together, as a couple, in love

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I should stop daydreaming so much  
I'm just going to keep letting myself down  

I know it's a short poem but I don't think that's a problem. My only concern is that it feels kind of cliche. I also get the feeling that I didn't write this and I just read it somewhere and thought I wrote it. Any thoughts?

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Posted Sep 24, 2016, 11:20 PM UTC

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