Insomnia
I lie awake, more sleepless nights,
My mind is full of monstrous frights.
Tossing and turning, I cannot sleep,
Sliding down a slope so steep.
Wondering what plagues my mind,
Insomnia, stress, anxiety, or maybe I'm just going blind?
I'm still awake at 2 a.m.,
In my mind, yelling "Not again!"
Tossing and turning for a few more hours.
The opposite of super powers.
Alas I fall asleep fatigued,
And finally, I am relieved.
This is the first poem I have ever written, I know it's not that good but would like some feedback/constructive criticism.
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/55h9a0/a_broken_record/d8apxah
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/55hgb6/nonsense/d8aq6bt
Posted Oct 2, 2016, 1:10 PM UTC · edited
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