A Satire
Pampered gourmets, teenybopper
Trampled whore-haze, gallinipper
Oh God forbid the two intersect
It may just unite a merry KAH
The very sound of an angry bird
Perhaps the veteran bald eagle
The mutineer of scrutiny here
Can bring domes of free in this gross land
If only the angel were alive
Satire I worked up. Bit of humor, lots of play on words.
Posted Oct 27, 2016, 3:12 AM UTC
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I love the word play of America as "merry KAH" and that it is also onomatopoeia of an angry bird, in particular a bald eagle. I also like the eagle's symbolism. I like the fun words, especially the not so common ones like whore-haze and galliniper. I also like the word choice of "gross" because it could mean more than one thing. I wonder about the angel you reference, but I would guess it has religious undertones since you also mention "God". Or maybe you are calling the statue of an eagle an angel: "if only the angel were alive". I like the strong emotion that is apparent through the word choice.