All is in Order

I like this poem very much. It is easily understandable to the naked eye, but clearly is much more meaningful to one who has felt like this.

I stir: Humor. That which we consider fragile due to our egocentric nature does not suffer such flaws.

I witness: Great imagery and imagery to represent the opposite of conventional thought.

I yearn: If the fly represents insecurities and our self perception of our flaws.

I claim: Enjoyment for the imagery and a style akin to Jorge Borge whose work I really enjoy.

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