Strange. Quite enjoyable, though!

I think the first stanza could use some work, specifically the last three lines. I'm confused about the "Decembers' here" apostrophe. I also just think gnawing/thawing is maybe too obvious. Maybe it's necessary though, up to you, but something to consider. 

The second stanza really works for me though, like, *really* works. I love it! It has a choppy rhythm to it that I like to sometimes employ in my own work, and that last line... so good. Smothered! Very kind of, creepy? Yeah, I don't know. Unsettling. 

Good work. I'd say continue to jostle that first stanza around and it'll be perfect. 

Very nice! Your half rhymes kind of through me off at first, but after reading it a couple of times they grew on me. I guess that's part of the whole "gnawing" experience. Overall, quite good.

I liked this one. Made me think of how fragile us humans are, and how we should speak our mind to our loved ones before its too late.

    Speak frankly 
    be bold and abrasive 
    through fragmented teeth
    attached to sullen faces 
    though cheeks are warm
    winter's teeth gnawing 
    Decembers' here 
    and no chance of thawing 
 
    When you do it, if you do it
    please be mindful
    that you're just a man
    and pain is a reminder
    of what is cold
    but once was coloured 
    like her head against yours
    now brittle, frozen, smothered





https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/5ak9yg/my_head/d9hz4y8/

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/5amhlz/my_soul_is_a_social_media/d9hz3tj/

Gnawing