My Just Rewards

I dug a very deep hole,

then awoke at the bottom.

 

Blindly I dug,

for years without listening.

 

Help was rebuffed,

then eventually ceased.

 

Hope seemed lost,

so all of them left me.

 

Looking up at my climb,

it's what I deserve...

 

 

*Not a writer and I am not sure why, but I felt the desire to write. Havent really done any poetry before so basic feedback would be very helpful! I wrote a sorter version for twitter but felt I needed to expand on it a little bit. Thanks!

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