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Astronaut

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My Poem:

I saw you as a star, a beautiful shining one

Yet I got burnt and I got burnt bad

As I floated in pain, I realised something

My time in this universe is nothing

It is but a nano second

I cannot afford to waste my time

I leave not in sadness but happiness

I am liberated, freed and above all unchained

My words were my bond, my bond was my soul

If it is not enough, then so be it

I will use what I have for others

Give them what beats inside of me

My happiness is their smile's

Their joy and knowledge

As I soar through this universe, I know my purpose

I know that no pain can stop me

Nothing, nothing can make me yield but death itself

I am and always will be here for you, like them

Yet the time has come for me to become a star

To burn so bright that others will know its me

They know who I am, they will know what I am

Too long I have chased a foolish dream

Too long have my words come to nothing

The time has come to chase something no one can take

Posted Jan 4, 2017, 9:21 AM UTC

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