New Script - first draft (feedback please!)

I saw somebody in the sub using the glagotic script to write their conlang, and really liked the style of it. You can see the influence it had on Old Church Slavonic, but it also reminded me a bit of the Eithiopic script (another script I really like!)

So I tried developing Glagotic into a more cursive style, to suit my Romlang Avena. Still not completely happy with how it looks, but here is a pic of the alphabet, and here is a longer text (the first paragraph from the first Harry Potter book). Here is today's Just Used challenge.