Thanks for the feedback. Glad you like it. 

I love the meter. I'm definitely struggling a bit with the last line, but I like it, the play on the word 'bending' as something servile.

Thanks. I'm mostly just haiku-ing to develop brevity. I'm noticing it requires greater depth of experience with the subject to render it in fewer words. Appreciate the feedback.

Interesting piece.  I think you're going for a haiku-style format and meter, which works well here.  The piece is very close to minimalistic (Roving thumbs / bend strings / servants dream) but could just as easily be expanded considerably.  Can't really think of anything to critique on this piece, tbh.  Good job.

Under roving thumb  
guitar strings bend for music  
servant's dream complete  
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