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paulmo07

Sometimes

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Sometimes,

late at night

when I could tell that

you were already sleeping,

I would grab your hand

and lace your fingers

through mine. And,

sometimes,

your grip would tighten

in mine

and I could feel it.

And I would ask myself if,

sometimes,

you loved me as much

as you said you did

after the two bottles of wine

it took for you to even

want me.


First time posting.. I wrote this a month or so ago to help me cope with a break up. Been wanting to share it and came across this subreddit. Hope you all enjoy it.

Childhood

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Posted Apr 22, 2017, 7:43 PM UTC

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