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The Black Hole

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Posted Apr 24, 2017, 1:31 AM UTC

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I really like the feel of the poem especially the opening lines.

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I actually love this, it captures an authentic feeling. Reading it gave me a sense of familiarity, which I appreciated. Good job, continue to post... I enjoyed the honesty in this.

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