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Eschatonist

ash tray

Feedback Received!

i dont love you when youre high
and your head sits blurrily
atop the shoulders of drunken giants
yes, why cant i see you in there
a soul unburdened by soul-searching
leaving me to daydream (daydrink?)
because you cant tell the difference
between love and a lifetime of one-night stands
but if you could then im sure you would
leave me alone under the morning's raspberry sky
(and make sure to fill the ash tray)


https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/68vs25/the_current_state_of_poetry_as_an_artform/dh29fmp/

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/68y2g6/fears/dh29chh/

Posted May 3, 2017, 4:30 AM UTC

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