One of my first ever mixed media drawings that i am planning to paint this summer. Any critiques? (Gouache, ink, oil pastels,and acrylic) paint)

Posted May 20, 2017, 9:16 PM UTC
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Posted May 20, 2017, 9:16 PM UTC
The headdress doesn't appear attached to their head as their head is too far forward, and if they're bald, that's fine, but not having hair makes this appear somewhat odd.
Yes, i see what youre saying about the hair.;she looks kinda weird because of the eyebrows and no hair on her head. Im probably gonna get rid of the eyebrows. Thanks
It carries good graphic impact, but the face and the headdress (if it is a headdress) feel too disjointed. I do like the overall style, though--just be mindful of finding ways to connect or balance your media and your subject matter.