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chongo403

One of my first ever mixed media drawings that i am planning to paint this summer. Any critiques? (Gouache, ink, oil pastels,and acrylic) paint)

One of my first ever mixed media drawings that i am planning to paint this summer. Any critiques? (Gouache, ink, oil pastels,and acrylic) paint)

Posted May 20, 2017, 9:16 PM UTC

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nomstompPainting•

It carries good graphic impact, but the face and the headdress (if it is a headdress) feel too disjointed. I do like the overall style, though--just be mindful of finding ways to connect or balance your media and your subject matter.

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xZeroRageAbstract•

The headdress doesn't appear attached to their head as their head is too far forward, and if they're bald, that's fine, but not having hair makes this appear somewhat odd.

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chongo403OP•

Yes, i see what youre saying about the hair.;she looks kinda weird because of the eyebrows and no hair on her head. Im probably gonna get rid of the eyebrows. Thanks

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