[Let's Play] what do you guys think about this video?

Hello everybody! So here's a video I released today, and just had some concerns I'd like to address

Strengths: editing, commentary, energy, etc.

Weaknesses: Facecam lighting, screech-y, too long.

What do you guys think? Thanks so much!

Link: https://youtu.be/w2D897ePPuE