I've been uploading a video a week for 4 weeks now, opinions on my content?

The title tells you the plan. I am trying to upload a video a week and improve on the content I upload.
It is hard to look at your own things and say what is good and what is bad therefore I am trying to find out what people think.
I typically record for something like 30 min to an hour and then just cut it down a bunch so then it is a lot easier to watch and lot more entertaining than the bulk video just sitting there.
If the video is long then that just means that there was a lot of good stuff going on in the video.

New Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=06uZ6GnjoRk

Previous Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TlbPBTAW_jI (Better imo)

Strengths:

• Cut down a lot to keep it interesting

• Actually talking feedback into account (slightly better thumbnails)

• feel like the quality is fairly good.

Weaknessessessessess:

• Still learning the ropes.
• Hard to critique myself so not sure what I am doing wrong to improve.
• Maybe the amount I cut out may make the video weird and hard to follow although I feel it's fine.