Great work! A few bits of feedback. To begin, I have a rather personal thing. I am not the biggest fan of cursing in poetry. There's nothing wrong with it, but it's always made me, as an individual, uncomfortable. The God damn you, I would shorten to damn you, not because of the God part, but I think it flows better and even furthers the expression of the line "my sentences are usually long," damn you feels exponentially shorter than God damn you, at least to me. As with fuck you, it just makes me feel uncomfortable. Obviously, this is a personal thing, so take it as you may, but I don't know. Part of me would change it to damn you. I don't have a vendetta against fuck or anything, but damn you feels more fitting thank fuck you in my opinion. Also, a damn you would connect down to the last line of the poem, just kinda putting a subtle connection of stanzas. With the theme your trying to keep (the short sentences is what I'm referring to), there are to lines that stand out against this.

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