With The Right Mind. Feedback would be highly appreaciated.

(This is still a work in progress. I had a lot of lines from songs I never finished and I challenged myself to try to glue them together and make one song.)

Well this ain't no illusion
But baby you just might be delusional, hyper-lethal
What the special occasion?
This degrading dance craze slowly fading out, in a roundabout

[CHORUS]
Well it hasn't killed us yet
So why just sit here and wait for death?
It'll never make us stronger
All it does is turn us into strangers
But it hasn't killed us yet
And on the bright side, with the right mind. All it is is what's unsaid

Now can you see the sunrise?
A mix of orange, grey, blue and blank white, as if the sky cried
Now crazy just got weirder
A hazy plot bound in a phased out medium, it's that serious

[CHORUS]

[Bridge]
I jumped in as an angel
Came back up as the devil himself
And no one dared to question it
So I guess we just shouldn't give a shit...
NOW GO!

[Solo]

Well it hasn't killed us yet
But on the bright side, with the right mind, it might just feel right or it'll bore you straight to death.

Posted Jun 17, 2017, 10:17 AM UTC

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