[Review Video] Hey guys, check out my first video titled "THE FANTASTIC START OF THE MOST MEDIOCRE CHANNEL EVER" I would love to hear your feedback

Self review: I think I did an OK job for my first video, I wanted to be able to entertain you guys a little bit, but felt as though I fell short of that. The ending is definitely too quick. I figured I had good volume and it was ultimately a good intro to a channel that I hope to update with various videos!

Please let me know what you think

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MOUKXaDC674

REVIEWS:

https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/6iohhq/review_video_working_on_the_unboxing_formula/dj9jsyu/

https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/6ik9rc/review_video_latest_video_showing_you_my_shopping/dj9jofb/