[Review Video] Story Time Video - Would Like Feedback
Hey guys! I posted on here not too long ago asking for feedback on my intro video, and everyone gave me really helpful advice/tips. Earlier this afternoon, I posted my first real video that has a point other than introducing my channel. There were a lot of things you all suggested that I tried to work into this video (better lighting, improved camera quality, different angles, etc.), so I wanted to post a link here to see if you guys had any positive/negative feedback for this one.
Link: https://youtu.be/EXou_hhfA2s
Self Review: I think I feel comfortable speaking in front of a camera now, since this is my second video, and I am decent with editing and jump cuts. My camera quality/lighting was pretty strong, although there were several parts of the video where my camera's focus changed and I felt as if my face got a little blurry. There are some decent jokes in this video and it has a pretty good 'flow' in terms of the story, but I'm worried that the actual plot isn't easy to follow because of the random jokes thrown in here and there.
Review 2: https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/6jbzmz/review_video_im_hiding_from_nintendo/djefy3t/
Posted Jun 26, 2017, 2:14 AM UTC · edited