[Review Video]A Road Taken, It's my first uploaded video and first real edit.

Please let this work since it keeps getting deleted.

Self Review: I've been wanting to make kind of a VHS type video where it kind of seemed nostalgic. But I never really had the equipment available to me to do it. But I bunkered down and settled with my phone camera that I shot in a few hours. I think it turned out okay for a video that got corrupted after 5 hours of editing and had to re-edit the whole thing. But I'm looking for some feedback to see what else I can bring to my videos and then become a full part of my channel since I'm wanting to have something different.

Thank you for your time!

Video Link https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BrtJiLD-7i8

Review 1 https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/6mgjdq/review_video_help_how_can_we_make_our_car_video/dk4v9b7/

Review 2 https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/6ml8jx/channel_critique_ive_hit_20_subscribers_and_well/dk4uqyx/