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Oxyproxy123

First slam- feedback would be awesome!!

I'm just a tiny bit weird- by tayler Oxman.

I'm just a tiny bit weird. I'm textbook, Strange is something to be feared. It's not There's some beuty in quirky In my mind I feel like I'm thirty. I should have a mortgage I dont I'm just dirty I never really though I could Achieve anything for the greatest good That emotion of being alienated All the time I'm frustrated The truth is I'll never be loved When I approach I feel a thud It's my heart escaping It screams it's true Why would I anyone be you Your so fucked and strange The devil in my blood exclaims I hear in my sinuses in my veins Don't think I'm a tiny bit weird I just see people as something feared

Posted Jul 16, 2017, 9:55 PM UTC

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