[Review Video] Parody audition sketch for Jake Paul's Team 10

Link: https://youtu.be/6rsnnPiuwzE

Hello! This is my first time on this thread so this format is a little new to me, I hope I did it correctly!

I just started making videos again after a 2 year long hiatus and so with me doing sketch comedies again, I was wondering if the cuts and jokes fell flat? Basically was this video entertaining enough to watch through for the entire 3 minutes and any other notes that you may have!

Self review: I honestly think that it's pretty funny, but I am worried that it may be because I wrote everything and so I am obliged to think so. The length of the video may be my weak point and perhaps I made it too corny with the cuts and titles? I was going for that sort of early 2000's vibe with some of the title graphics but I'm not too sure if it was the right choice.

Review Link 1: https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/6nqz62/channel_critique_new_channel_banner_and_updated/dkgkygp/

Review Link 2: https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/6o4e0p/review_video_a_quick_starbucks_life_hack/dkgklf5/