[SHORT] Sudden Change of A Dress (Thriller- 16 pages)
LOGLINE- A teenage girl walks into dress shop wearing a bloody nightgown.
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Does it escalate too quickly?
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Did I do the insert shot correctly?
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Does Deborah talk like a teenage girl?
Posted Jul 21, 2017, 9:59 PM UTC · edited
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