Need feedback - Gold - Soldier VOD

I would like some feedback on this VOD of my last game. I know it's a win but that shouldn't really matter because I know I still made a lot of mistakes and could have played much better

The things I noticed were

• bad ult usage
• bad positioning at times
• very shaky aim (I'm trying to work on that)
• no communication (my mic is broken, I'm working on getting another one)

Any help is appreciated!

Thanks

https://youtu.be/R6GRnbNRXAg