Hindrance

From rolled up sleeves

to rolled up notes,

pulled down hoods

and rolled up smokes,

grew up fast and

came down slow,

aged some years,

still yet to grow.

https://oc.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/6s19mr/i_go_alone_my_second_poem/?st=j627rm1j&sh=b128d4ab

https://oc.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/6s1ck4/he_had_born_to_lose_tattooed_around_his_rebel_flag/?st=j627rrzu&sh=f2b11e42

PS: I have no idea how to post the links of my feedback in the form of '1' and '2', hence the url's I posted instead, lol.