[Review Video] Tree Review: I sarcastically review of the tree in my friend's front yard

Video

I usually review video games and anime, but for this video, I felt like doing something non-sequitur and absurd. In this particular video, I feel I have a nice, short length to it to maximize viewability, while my older videos have been really long and perhaps unwieldy. I have toned down my obnoxious humor a notch and worked on improving the jokes and delivery. The goal of this video is to get a wtf reaction, or get a few chuckles, and hopefully some laughs.

Self review: As a shameless wannabe comedian, I feel that I have strengths in several key areas; confidence, energy, and timing. I also write funny skits for hours on end, so I feel I'm pretty good at writing jokes. However, I have heard some criticism that I come off as loud and obnoxious instead of funny sometimes. I'm sorry guys! =p I feel that one of my weaknesses is that sometimes I get nervous and stutter. My friend did his best to edit my stuttering out.

Anyways, as a new youtuber, I've come for critique. What do you think of my video? How can I improve? Does this video succeed as a piece of absurdist humor?

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Edit: Haha, whoops, I made a grammatical error in the title. Oh well :p