[Review Video] For Honor Gameplay - My First Look - I'm a Viking Baby! (Graphic Violence)(Swearing)

My channel has been doing reasonably well (for a brand new channel) with reviews and 'top 10' style videos, but what I'd really like to get into is Let's Plays. This is my first crack at it! Would be awesome to hear your honest feedback.

Self Review: I think the video quality is pretty high for a let's play style video as I'm using a decent Canon video camera. Also, I believe that I come across clearly and seem relatively confident as I'm just being myself. It felt like the video was maybe a little short compared to similar YouTubers. But I was really worried about boring people and losing the audience. I also hate the fact that I can hear myself clicking... I don't have the cash to buy a mic that will eliminate that right now (any ideas are massively appreciated for solving this!).

Video Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0iwdz7Vsi6I

Review 1: https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/6tgel1/review_video_my_first_videomontage/dllzek4/ Review 2: https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/6tapwd/review_video_swearing_starting_a_new_lets_play/dllztkl/