[Review Video] Am I Boring? I Can't Tell... Commentary Style Video

For some context, I'm making what seems basically like vlog/let's play combo videos. I'm still relatively new, but have been posting videos for a couple of months now. I was able to get some feedback on here on one of my first videos, so I thought I would return and see what people might have to say about my stuff now that I've been trying it out for a little while longer!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c4oixLyjFj8

Self review: Despite efforts, I still hesitate and use 'um' and 'ah' more than I would like. I'm also a bit rushed towards the end of the video because I realized I had more I wanted to say but I've been trying to keep my videos to around 15 minutes. Additionally, my transitions between gameplay commentary and my chosen topic aren't super smooth. I'm also still not entirely convinced I'm not boring.

Here are the reviews I've done today: https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/6tcaku/review_video_a_little_unlike_li_ep_1/dlmklad/

and

https://www.reddit.com/r/youtubers/comments/6tod64/review_video_sony_sel50f18_unboxing_new_lens/dlml5y5/