Stephen's Town

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My first poem, any criticism is welcome!

A killer dog and an evil clown,
Available here in Stephen's Town.
Feel free to visit but don't forget,
A stay with King you might regret

Bring your pets, dead or alive,
In Stephen's Town they all shall thrive.
We have towers, dark and tall
And psychic kids, short and small

The Overlook opens in a day,
You'll drive by Shawshank on your way.
If you make it, I'm impressed.
Although you're still not done with Stephen's Test

You think that's it? You think you're done?
Vacation has only just begun.
Leave if you want, but just beware
The creations of Stephen's town don't play fair.

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Posted Sep 24, 2017, 10:27 PM UTC · edited

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