Growth.

Feedback Received!

Out of your loving warmth I grew

As I grew I stole from you

You never cared how we both changed

or how at your loss I would gain

Through the years we both grew cold

Now you're not here, and I am old

I do still wish we weren't so distal

but you are melt, and I am crystal.

Links to feedback:

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/72zbaz/sanguine_dream/dnmssak/

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/7315ek/a_fighters_match_feedback_request_trigger/dnmsoxo/

Posted Sep 28, 2017, 4:48 PM UTC · edited

26
Loading comments…