The Depths

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Oceans beauty forever deep

Within it lies a world that sleeps

And you may find the love inside

By diving head first, eyes kept wide

Let them guide you, those current flows

They take you where you need to go

And when you surface bring the true

A jewel this earth has far too few.

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Posted Oct 18, 2017, 1:04 PM UTC

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