Notice it hum

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Notice it hum

 

Notice it
Hum
Notice it ill-fated
Hum
Notice it, a truck on the road

 

Rain, notice it
It, like a branch
Hum
A shift in time
A branch drops

 

Notice it
I held my hands up
Hum-- on the road
as if fingers could stop it
A truck converging on the road.

 

Rain, humming
A decisive curve.
I should have noticed,
Ill-fated
Can you explain
The way rain drops
and doesn't notice the road

 

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Posted Oct 19, 2017, 3:13 PM UTC · edited

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