Olleh?

Olleh? Olleh? Olleh?

I've spent too much time
in this backwards place
Too much time inside
My inside-space

I want to go outside
Bursting forth and forward
into other kingdoms
something more than this

Moonside is the setting
where hello is goodbye
and goodbye is hello
it's dark, but no meaning

Light is fun
Meaningful!
Ollehhello?
Why no response? I think I maybe know why...

Critiques

• https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/78htsk/high/
• https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/78k1z6/release/