[Comedy/Gaming] My Improvisation Skills Are Improving

Hey Newtubers, I've been making gaming videos for about a month now and I think I've reached a stage where there's less pressure on myself to do commentary over the games I play. Things flow far more naturally and it's way funner to record. Could you please give me feedback about whether the video was entertaining or if there was a section that felt out of place or made you lose interest because I'm now trying to attract frequent viewers once they've seen one of my videos.

Strengths: I think the commentary flows more naturally and is more engaging.

Weaknesses: I'm not able to tell if I should include certain sections in the final cut while editing so there may be some clips that affect the pacing of the video.

Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cNRHWyGVD-U