Soap
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Posted Nov 7, 2017, 4:28 PM UTC
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Maybe I'm not not meant to to know what's going on and I'm more of meant to get a vibe and if so well done!
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my apologies; I am new here, I will do that
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I'm getting a very serious sense of lost hope and being too tied down to chase your dreams. If that was your goal, well done! However, the opening lines seem almost too cryptic and really threw me off.
Yes, your interpretation is correct but incomplete and yes I purposely made it so to throw off people :).