Nicely penned. Not sure if "sole," is intentional, or a typo. The form reads like a well written short story. Maybe if you shorten the lines to read as a well-structured prose, the read would savor each line; poetically. Love it, though!!!!!

 I love the picture you managed to paint in my head. You really took me back to some good memories. You can really get the feel for how infatuated the author is with this person. Look forward to reading more

###removed: rule 4 

Give two pieces of feedback on other people's poetry before posting your  own.  Please read the [Stickied Announcement](https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/73vf47/thinking_of_posting_a_poem_read_this_first) to correct this.   

    
##This is the second time I've had to remove this poem for the same reason. Don't break the rules again. Bans will follow for a third infraction. This is your warning. 

Just thought you should know