Formatting my Friend. Take a look at the sidebar. 

Formatting would definitely help this piece. I gather there are rhymes, but without the visual cue of line breaks or enjambment the meter is all over the place and difficult to follow. For what its worth it reads like a spoken word piece, but I feel like 'yo' and 'tho' are lazy text slang rather that purposeful, artistic inclusion. 

I genuinely liked the words here, but the way it’s presented is not good. Don’t get me wrong, the poem is good. Present it with well placed line breakers, punctuation too maybe. This will only make it better!


Wicked
He must be addicted
Smoke so damn much
But it’s more like commitment 
I don’t need to fit in
I like how I’m living
Being me for you
Was my the realest decision
smoke in my vision
But I see through
The lies and deception
What is yo intentions
Holier than tho
Gods gift the only thing that make you think I’m a demon
https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/7qnld6/her_resolution/?st=JCH3BUTO&amp;sh=46f39ad6


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