Epilogue
Writer's cramp, growing age,
ink is spilled across the page.
It spells out my biography:
"An Obligation to Gravity"
Posted Jan 19, 2018, 8:17 AM UTC
33
Writer's cramp, growing age,
ink is spilled across the page.
It spells out my biography:
"An Obligation to Gravity"
Posted Jan 19, 2018, 8:17 AM UTC
short but insightful . Growing age flows perfectly into ink is spilled across the page . well done !
I really enjoyed this . Short and sweet , why I enjoyed it so much is because it told me that writing for you is as natural as gravity, and how you’ve been doing it for so long that the physical action and feeling of writing is your legacy. And yet it’s bittersweet . Maybe I’m just reading into it way too much but again , I really enjoyed it .
I love short and pithy poems, but the trade off is that they really got a pack a punch. I was liking everything up until the last line, it felt a little deflated. "An obligation" specifically feels a bit passive, although I guess one could argue that meta narrative is one of passivity. Hmm.
Either way I enjoyed this, keep up the good work.