The concept is pretty cool. The way the reflection of both science and emotion over the topic is interesting. Short and sweet. Good effect.


Ah! The ultimate question. When is Schrödinger's cat truly dead? The blending of two states of existence. When does one state become the other? I say the answer lies in the way we view existence itself.

We use the word "death" to help us understand the shifting of consciousness from one state to another. I say there is no death per se except of the physical vessel because I do not believe consciousness ceases to exist. This is because physics has determined that energy cannot be destroyed, only transformed. I believe consciousness is the gas (energy) that runs the vehicle.

I shall make a comparison to walking through doors. You can be on either side of a closed door or standing in the doorway deciding which room to step into. While standing in the doorway, you ARE simultaneously existing in both worlds as you see into and are partly present in both rooms. When the door closes, you are no longer seen by others on the opposite side of the door but you are still there on one side or the

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