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Everything is jagged
Glittering shards of reality
Grind against figments of my imagination
There is no sunshine here
Crystalline dust turns all light into fog
Words of joy turn upside-down
Christmas lights glare accusingly
Unreality flattens and fiction sparkles
Memories turn inside-out and become monsters
Warm reassurances stab me with icy knives
Sense is nothingness
I am a coward

 
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