[682] Playing To The Sky

First time using GoogleDocs so hopefully this works:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XFDFFP6MOzC8odiNVA7Uj69p5NQXXC_aRp2gb_ilcp8/edit?usp=sharing

I have been writing flash fiction based sometime based on image prompts. This one was a picture of a girl playing the violin, looking at the clouds. I was in a sad mood that day though so this came out. Its my first post on here, and I guess I'm looking for any and all feedback. I've never written anything longer than maybe 1500 words, and never had any critique at all, as I started middle of last year in my 30's. R/WritingPrompts is good for stimulus to write something and occasionally upvotes if one catches fire, but I don't really know if its any good or what I can do to improve.

My first go at a critique - https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/80ib39/2196_prologue_and_chapter_1_at_rivers_end/duwlk7t/