Thank you a lot of it was in reference to how I was treated by my older brother so its all in direct corelation to my past.

Thats awesome! I'm not the biggest expert on poetry or anything but I enjoy it and I liked this. I liked the use of ALL CAPS at the end of certain phrases. It really drummed up something that I can relate in my past and I'm positive will relate to others as well. Great work!

I love the intensity of the writing and I think it matches the concept.  With this line though 'Flight or fight I want my life to be mine' I think 'Flight' starting it makes it a bit more pronounced. And for what you're going with the poem I think 'Fight' overshadowing flight might be more appropriate. You're the master key of your destiny though. Great poem.

I do what I want not of vile spite 

But in personal dedication, choice

You do not decide who I am, I fight 

I choose, not you, can you not hear my voice?





You belittle me and you lie, NO MORE

I was a scapegoat, you wane in MY LIFE

Your assumption that I was your chrome ore

You were only ever to be my knife





Flight or fight I want my life to be mine

Relentless for that which I want, I WANT

I am no coward, iron will, steel spine

In my heart, a lion laying dormant





From now on, you shall have no mastery

My own choices, so satisfactory

From now on, I will be the master key 

Of that, which I can call my destiny






1)https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/81lztt/message_failed_to_send/dv3tkcb?utm_source=reddit-android
2)https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/818qhn/triptych/dv3u1ah?utm_source=reddit-android

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