Whatever I May Be; (a quick little poem I wrote just now)

Feedback Received!

Whatever I may be -

I may not be an artist;

But I'll paint if just for fun,

I may not be a singer;

But I'll sing till day is done,

I may not be a music man;

But I'll pluck the strings and smile,

I may not be at all;

But I was just for a while,

Feedback link #1:https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/68n4t9/the_dying_elegy/

Feedback link #2:https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/7qy5tr/crystal_miscarries_in_a_cafe_bathroom/

P.s I hope i did the feedback thing right.

Posted Mar 4, 2018, 8:05 PM UTC · edited

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